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Bayate Ichijouji

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PostSubject: poetry, songs, short stories!! do you like to write cuz i do :)   Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:05 am

hey guys just posting this in case people have am artistic side ^^. you can post anything you want here. songs, poetry, short stories, whatever. express yourself, im sure its very good. ill even post my own poem first ;p.

Empty Eyes (an original poem by me)


Nothing to see,

Barren to the core,

Giving a plain look that cannot be altered,

Traces of sorrow and sadness,

No sign of emotion or recognition of any other existance,

Looking forward, Always forward,

Never to drift,

Seeing what hasn't been seen,

Never straying,

From the path they have chosen,

Of solitude and darkness,

One Glimpse of something,

Not hope, but regret,

Inability to change,

Looking on,

Into nothing,

These empty eyes you see.


kinda depressing but its just how my mind works, now show me what you got you lazy bums lol. i wanna see xD.
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PostSubject: Re: poetry, songs, short stories!! do you like to write cuz i do :)   Wed Dec 17, 2008 3:30 pm

i don't get poetry O_O

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PostSubject: Re: poetry, songs, short stories!! do you like to write cuz i do :)   Thu Dec 18, 2008 12:16 am

I love it! It's so thoughtful....I wish I had a better vocabulary so I could write too.......

you wrote it before? O_O

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PostSubject: Re: poetry, songs, short stories!! do you like to write cuz i do :)   Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:50 am

no xD. i wrotr it a while ago but ive always loved to write lol. its just fun to me Very Happy. blaze you dont get it? thats cuz ur weird! lol. common guys, post stuff too i promise i wont laugh. thanks for the compliment midnight, much appreciated. ill post another thing soon, but later lol
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PostSubject: Re: poetry, songs, short stories!! do you like to write cuz i do :)   Thu Dec 18, 2008 7:10 pm

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PostSubject: Re: poetry, songs, short stories!! do you like to write cuz i do :)   Thu Dec 18, 2008 10:11 pm

EEK I MEAN UMM!!!! you are so cool and you are amazing, you should be the next president xD. o.o lol
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PostSubject: Re: poetry, songs, short stories!! do you like to write cuz i do :)   Thu Dec 18, 2008 10:18 pm

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